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When I was studying for my CELPIP exam I got material from them. Unfortunately, I can not put the PDF to the public because it has a watermark with my personal email. But I can put you here what it says.

CELPIP's fourth error as they state:

Parallelism is the pleasing balance achieved when ideas of equal importance are presented side by side in similar grammatical form. When they aren’t, we have faulty parallelism, a common CELPIP error.

Generally, clauses balance with clauses, phrases balance with phrases, and words balance with words. That last sentence had three parallel clauses. Contrast it with this sentence, which needs to be revised so it has parallel adjectives: The mall was noisy, crowded, and everything was chaotic. We strive for parallelism when we coordinate elements with the conjunctions and, but, or, nor, not only . . . but also, both . . . and, either . . . or, and neither . . . nor. (Neither a borrower nor a lender be.) We also strive for parallelism when making comparisons with as or than. (Blood is thicker than water.) Parallelism makes sentences more effective, efficient, and pleasing.

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When I was studying for my CELPIP exam I got material from them. Unfortunately, I can not put the PDF to the public because it has a watermark with my personal email. But I can put you here what it says.

CELPIP's second error as they state:

We see a lot of run-on sentences in the written part of the CELPIP. A run-on sentence is composed of two independent (i.e., potentially stand-alone) clauses that have been stuck together with either commas or nothing at all.

There are two types of run-on sentences: comma splices and fused sentences. A comma splice is two independent clauses joined only by a comma. (Thank you for your resumé, we will contact you soon.) A fused sentence is two independent clauses joined with nothing at all. (We have selected the candidates to be interviewed we would like you to come in next week.) The easiest solution is to break the clauses into separate sentences or else coordinate them.

In repairing a run-on sentence, we also have the option of changing one of the independent clauses into a dependent clause by using an appropriate subordinating word (e.g., because, if, although). The result is a complex sentence with one dependent clause and one independent clause.

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Among many things, CELPIP exam is required to migrate to Canada if you are going to try for The English language. So I am writing about exercises you will have on it. One of the exercises CELPIP has is to describe a picture. So here it is how I did.